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14. Smile by ~fierypoplartree:iconfierypoplartree:

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“Smile and the world smiles with you,” my Mum always said. My arse it does. They just wonder what that freaky kid is doing walking down the street with a big stupid grin on their face. I was that freaky kid.
And I loved it.
The shopping centre had a new meaning; no longer was it just a place for buying things. I was shopping for you now.
©2009-2010 ~fierypoplartree
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I don't think it's done... Do you?

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:iconkaiminden:
=Kaiminden Mar 13, 2009, 1:40:18 AM
Whoa! I love your work so much. Like, there's always something that twists it around and makes it go from awesome to like super awesome in a second. Great job. I loved the last line.

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Writer.Photomanipulator.Artist. Check me out.
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~fierypoplartree Mar 13, 2009, 1:46:16 AM
Naww, how sweet you are! <3

I'm not sure that the shopping thing and the smiling thing are connected, but yeah. I'll think about it some more.

Thank you SO much, love. :hug:

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And so it is, just like you said it would be.
Life goes easy on me
...most of the time.
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=Kaiminden Mar 13, 2009, 1:47:26 AM
No problem. Your writing is always a pleasure to read.

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Writer.Photomanipulator.Artist. Check me out.
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~fierypoplartree Mar 13, 2009, 1:52:01 AM
I'm glad. It isn't always a pleasure to write.
:p
<3

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And so it is, just like you said it would be.
Life goes easy on me
...most of the time.
:iconkaiminden:
=Kaiminden Mar 13, 2009, 2:03:29 AM
Understandably of course. I feel that way frequently myself.XD

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Writer.Photomanipulator.Artist. Check me out.
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~fierypoplartree Mar 13, 2009, 2:07:30 AM
Hahaha. Yes indeed.
Well, I'm off to have some alone time.
Loveyoulots. <3

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And so it is, just like you said it would be.
Life goes easy on me
...most of the time.
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=BeatingMyHeart Mar 13, 2009, 4:32:40 PM
the part about the freaky kid made me giggle <3
i like this, but it could use some additions to make it even better =]
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~Ghrey Mar 13, 2009, 4:57:05 PM
oh, it changes just so quickly
and I love it, but!
what happens before? if you have anything else to say,
you ought to say it. I feel like there's more waiting

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Bore, n.: A person who talks when you wish him to listen.
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~fierypoplartree Mar 14, 2009, 12:42:31 AM
Yes, yes. I think I might work on this one. <3

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And so it is, just like you said it would be.
Life goes easy on me
...most of the time.
:iconfierypoplartree:
~fierypoplartree Mar 14, 2009, 12:45:36 AM
Hahahaha, I'm seriously that freaky kid. It's fun. <3

It definitely could. I like it, so I want to work on it more. :)

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And so it is, just like you said it would be.
Life goes easy on me
...most of the time.
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