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I'll show you. by ~fierypoplartree:iconfierypoplartree:

Categories Literature > Prose > Fiction > General Fiction


And as I brought the knife up to her neck,
I said "I'll show you who's not an artist."
©2009-2010 ~fierypoplartree
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*shrugs* I dunno.

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~fallingtodespair Mar 3, 2009, 2:14:46 AM
Intriguing...
I'd liked to see where that went if you turned into a longer piece of writing.

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=Kaiminden Mar 3, 2009, 2:21:57 AM
Whoa. That like made me catch my breath. Seriously. I really liked the short and to the pointedness of it. It's like "what's the backstory oh mai god."

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~MobMotherScitah Mar 3, 2009, 2:56:24 AM
How very Joker of you! ^^

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=GwenavhyeurAnastasia Mar 3, 2009, 2:34:11 PM
I second what someone said before - I'd love to see you turn this into something longer.
Kind of made me catch my breath in shock. Was not expecting it.

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~fierypoplartree Mar 3, 2009, 9:02:06 PM
Thank you?
:p

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And so it is, just like you said it would be.
Life goes easy on me
...most of the time.
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~fierypoplartree Mar 3, 2009, 9:02:50 PM
Hahaha xD

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And so it is, just like you said it would be.
Life goes easy on me
...most of the time.
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~fierypoplartree Mar 3, 2009, 9:03:26 PM
Well, I can't decide if I'm good enough at long things to put it up. :p
There is a back story though. :D

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And so it is, just like you said it would be.
Life goes easy on me
...most of the time.
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~fierypoplartree Mar 3, 2009, 9:04:10 PM
Oh, it will be a longer piece of writing! :D
It's the first line of my biography. Well, of what I've done so far. But I liked it like that. :)

Thank you, so much. :)

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And so it is, just like you said it would be.
Life goes easy on me
...most of the time.
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~fierypoplartree Mar 3, 2009, 9:12:09 PM
It's the first line of my biography on the cannibal (what I've written so far), but I don't know if any of the rest is good enough so far to put it up, so I'll leave it until I've handed it in. :)

I hope it's a good kind of shock though, I never write anything remotely scary. Haha

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And so it is, just like you said it would be.
Life goes easy on me
...most of the time.
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